This is our groups audience feedback in reference to our short film. I think all of these suggestions definitely put us in a place to make the story make a bit more sense than what it does currently and this is the main area our group are going to improve.
The title suggestions we received were taken into account, but since then we have decided the title will be 'Purgatory'. We believe this title fits the story much better as the whole plot is about someone trying to get revenge on his killer before he can move to heaven, he is stuck as a ghost until he does this.
In terms of how the killer will be caught, the undercover detective will eventually bring all the clues together with the help of the ghost placing things to help her who doesn't realise there a ghost until near the end of the film when she realises who the killer is.
